Looks pretty good for a starter bag.
HockaLouis made some very good points.
I do have a few suggestions of my own...
The TP you have (not in the coffee tin) should be in a waterproof bag (maybe a Ziploc), same with the socks. You might also want to add a change of clothes (pants, shirt, undies).
Those candles - are they emergency or tea light?
Also, didn't notice a first aid kit.
So far, I'd have to say good start. Keep working on it.
Also, take all of this stuff and go camping with it (and not in perfect weather, either - though, don't do anything to endanger yourself). Use it - to make sure you know HOW to use it, and that it does actually work for what you want it to do.
Insert witty comment here......
Vincit Omnia Veritas
Vincere est Vivere